Liberty & Stars

It all started in the simplest observation.

In the midway of the desert
silent and pure, he stood naked to the star,
the all mighty shined and grinned,
watching the man suffer.

Days passed and the star felt shame,
the man is naked , easy to grab ,
easy to harm, easy to die.

The man observed for days and nights,
without stop and without breaks,
he found the answer in the star.

The star has given man hope,
given him freedom , given him justice,
all by the power of watching.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Mystic_Angel]

i think its beautiful

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

In the midway of the desert silent and pure, he stood naked to the star,.....beautiful poetry, makes one think deeply.