Here...hear

Parle wha'?

Up in the towers where birds could be seen,
stood the bell of awe unseen,
Old dust , hard steel,
but didn't shine as it used to be.

Hence came the time, after decades,
the little felt so poor, so easy,
"should we slay the king?"

many answers came in advance,
and many actions were taken ,
the bell apparently felt the battling.

In the middle of the battle,
while they were taking the bastille,
someone noticed the bell,
shining on it's own will.

He got to the top of the tower,
stood at dismay and said :
"Liberté, Egalité, Fraternité!"

Author's Note

Put a lot of thought into this one, please critic.

Reviews

[The Mysterious Daff]

the real subject of the poem, which is being revealed towards the end of it, is surprising and unexpected. The way you wrote about it is very sophisticated. I'm impressed!

[MrKnowAll]

Thank you very much :)