Walk on The Sun

In the lucid night,
I found you wondering alone.
I called out my name,
but you were silent , like the night.

I gave you everything,
including my soul,
in return - nothing.

Walk with me on the sun,
where I can see your true color!

Don't be afraid!

There you shall feel the heat,
bursting and leaving us ,
beautiful..

Author's Note

Trust is hard to gain.

Reviews

[Raymond Mesa]

It's beautiful, I love your poem

[sithlordjp]

Beautiful... " I called out my name " Fascinating line... All the implications it contains, well done!

[MrKnowAll]

Observant! Thank you for reviewing!

[CindyLu]

Shell on the last stanza- shouldn't that be shall? Other than that, a brilliant metaphor, lovely write. I can relate to the feelings :)

[MrKnowAll]

Yup! Thanks for reviewing it :)

[CindyLu]

You're welcome :) it's right impressive

[PP]

In return nothing, is kind of sad:( Very impressive !

[MrKnowAll]

I was in the process of expressing my emotions. I felt the need to show the sadness beyond the obvious way. Thank you very much!

[PP]

You are welcome indeed!

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Nice one!

[MrKnowAll]

I remade it, so it will be more powerful , I sensed it wasn't enough clear or meaningful towards the enlightenment of " walk with me on the sun ".

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I admire your efforts