Friend zone
A Poem by
Blb1996
You love but not loved back

Roses are red violets are blue but forever alone why do I sit and wait by the phone face it your in the friend zone
© 2012 Blb1996
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Oh, I love those kinds of poems! I remember in kindegarten, my teacher made us write a poem like that for our parents! Really good write! :)
Posted 1 Year Ago
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Ah, this does bring back memories... :) Good job, you've portrayed the sense of adolescent longing really effectively and concisely.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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Ah yes, the friendzone, every boy and man's dreaded enemy. Quite simple for a poem, but it conveys your feelings quite well.
By the way, you misspelled "you're".
Posted 1 Year Ago
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