Friend zone

Friend zone

A Poem by Blb1996
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You love but not loved back

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Roses are red violets are blue but forever alone why do I sit and wait by the phone face it your in the friend zone

© 2012 Blb1996



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Oh, I love those kinds of poems! I remember in kindegarten, my teacher made us write a poem like that for our parents! Really good write! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ah, this does bring back memories... :) Good job, you've portrayed the sense of adolescent longing really effectively and concisely.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ah yes, the friendzone, every boy and man's dreaded enemy. Quite simple for a poem, but it conveys your feelings quite well.

By the way, you misspelled "you're".

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Blb1996
Blb1996

Martin, Ohio, OH



About
I`m 15. And is always here to help you no matter what more..

Writing
So alone So alone

A Poem by Blb1996