Human

Human

A Poem by Mrudula Rani
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If we don't care for each other who will?

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When you are in pain,
I won't share mine,
For not to bring you down.

I can't assure you it will be fine soon,
What awaits us... I do not know for certain.

I cry my tears in private
And ware a smile bright
To make you feel alright

I extend my hand to hold yours strong
Wish you well and let you know that you are not alone
It is all I can do, for I am only human!

© 2017 Mrudula Rani



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You've simply stated the basic things a person can do to be the perfect friend in a situation when the other person is hurting & you hit the nail on the head with each one. I rarely speak of my own chronic pain becuz it makes people feel they can't complain about their own pain, which they perceive to be less than mine. Also, I try to pray for the best possible outcome becuz there are no guarantees & God is not there to deliver everything we want. Your sensibilities are so on par with my own, it blows my mind sometimes. Anyone would feel mightily soothed to get a message like this when times are tough (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mrudula Rani

1 Month Ago

Dear Margie,
Your writings are bold and brilliant,
And our hearts you capture!
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barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Just seeing your name makes me smile here on WC! *smile* Thank you for the lovely reply verse! It wa.. read more
Mrudula Rani

4 Weeks Ago

Have a very good Christmas with Lola and Paloma.
You show compassion to others and that is commendable. You show understanding marvelously as humans.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mrudula Rani

1 Month Ago

Thank you for the lovely comments. All the best.
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

You are welcome. All the best.
Another beautiful poem so well said. I had an Aunt who alwsys said 'mustn't grumble' when you asked her how she was. She lived to the grand old age of 93, and it was only after her death that they discovered she was riddled with cancer. You poem is more about emotional pain. And I think it is very noble of you not to upset others by talking about it.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mrudula Rani

1 Month Ago

Your Aunt sounds like a very interesting person. did you notice that longevity and attitude to ward.. read more
Mrudula Rani

1 Month Ago

Thank you for a very beautiful review. Wish you all the best. Affectionately, Mrudula
Great Aunt Astri

1 Month Ago

You are welcome. Enjoy the Christmas break
Well put. Sometimes we have to take the pain off others. You will be rewarded.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mrudula Rani

1 Month Ago

The best reward would be ... the other person appreciating your effort!
Paul Bell

1 Month Ago

I think so.

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Added on December 11, 2017
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Tags: Friendship, care