Life ( shallow wisdom in snippets. 5)

Life ( shallow wisdom in snippets. 5)

A Poem by Mrudula Rani

If life is the fire, or the flame,
Then the oil, or the wax is the time?
And the wick is the form?
Conception is the point of ignition!
The flame extinguishes ...
When the wax or the wick is in short stock!!

© 2018 Mrudula Rani


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We decide how well we are stick on the wax or the wick- how long we last if don’t, how long we invest or don’t- very interesting words you’ve written here- we need to decide where we invest our fires flames- very catchy, well done🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Loved your views on my words. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
I assume this a subject about early death or a short life.the metaphors for either is brilliant. Exceptional!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your brilliant perception!

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Added on February 24, 2018
Last Updated on February 24, 2018
Tags: Life, flame, wick


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