Eyes have it

Eyes have it

A Poem by Mrudula Rani

Eyes utter no words. Yet speak volumes.
When a pair of them greet you with love,
Be assured, they will keep you safe come hell or heaven.
And those that are full of charm;
is longing to be in your arms.
The ones that speak to your heart
And meet You with laughing eyes
They just love your presence!

When you see desire in his eyes,
He is hungry for yours!
If you read impatience as well in those looks,
An answer he requires,
If you meet all of the above traits in a single set of peepers,
That might become a Soulmate!
And will stick around, if you reciprocate!

But if you ever meet an eye that's full of spite,
Run for cover!
There isn't much hope for its soul.
Save yours !

© 2018 Mrudula Rani



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mou
eyes are the reflection of soul..a gentle and loving stare for all my strength and weakness: that a woman could search in a soulmate..so true..a very creative write, written with so much care..wonderful
mou.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Months Ago

I am glad I pleased your sensibilities. Thank you.
mou

6 Months Ago

my pleasure :)
Lol- yes eyes can launch a thousand ships to war- but so true the look of the eyes wherein your souls soulmate may lie dormant is the most wonderful sight there is to behold where no words are necessary to be spoken- gives me goosebumps- wonderful poem🌹

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Months Ago

Your review is absolutely beautiful. Loved it. Thank you very much. All the best.
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

My pleasure🌹
Powerful images! I like how you brought balance between the beauty and danger of eyes....we need wisdom to tell the difference sometimes...

One edit suggestion - I’m sure you meant “its” and not “it’s” in the second last line.

Beautiful poetry :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Months Ago

Thank you very much for the lovely review. The "its" mistake I keep doing a lot. From now on I will.. read more
Eyes are the window to soul and can swollow us or reject us- beauty is in the eye of the beholder and to fall inlove with the soul through the eyes us a precious things indeed- lovely words🌹

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Months Ago

Thank you for reading my words. I appreciate your review a lot. All the best
I enjoyed this. Keep it up up.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Months Ago

Thank you. All the best.

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Added on March 1, 2018
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Tags: Eyes, love, soulmate