Rebirth

Rebirth

A Poem by Mrudula Rani
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Personal belief

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Rebirth is just coming back,
To fix things that have been
Left undone or broken
By the end of a journey ...
Some times to pay the dues,
Of love and lost connections.
Returning in which ever form
suits to get the job done!

© 2018 Mrudula Rani



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thanks so much for this amazing work and entry into my competition
this is making me inquisitive if this happens
thanks so much

Posted 1 Month Ago


I really like these words and thoroughly enjoyed considering 'Rebirth' which clearly reflects your personal beliefs and which are not too far removed from my own. I particularly like the little touch of tongue in cheek humour and the general underlying philosophy...Your 'Just coming back, to fix things that have been left undone or broken' is superb...................................Neville

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

6 Months Ago

Thank you dear friend for the marvelous words of support. I am glad your views agree with mine.obri.. read more
Neville Pettitt

6 Months Ago

Hey, I said it before & will surely say it again, and again, my pleasure......N
for me this applies to all the opportunities we have in life to make amends ...to change for the better ...let things go...know ourselves more deeply ..know God ...all those things your poem mentions .... everyday those opportunities present themselves ... my belief is that death is permanent as far as this world goes ... so we differ a little on personal beliefs ;) i like how your poem seems to simplify things ..funnels thoughts into a very clear focus on the seriousness of choices .. tho you don't come right out and say it ... i like the bit of sarcasm in your closing ... as reincarnation does not necessarily mean another life as human ... could be squid ... or slug ;)) thought provoking poem .. enjoyed your "stuff"
E.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

ahahahah sage indeed huh! :) old as one maybe ;) yes...i think Science, the Light and God are very c.. read more
Mrudula Rani

6 Months Ago

You do have this wonderful wisdom and very considerate attitude towards every one, like a sage!
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

thank you ... :)
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mou
we all come to this world for doing something great and if it's left then 'come again'..most of people believe that rebirth is only a curse..but I love your concept that it can be something different, for a pleasant cause as well..complete positive vibration..true..what could be more important than to return the dues of love! a very creative write..just beautiful
mou.

Posted 6 Months Ago


mou

6 Months Ago

you're very sweet :)
Mrudula Rani

6 Months Ago

Thank you friend.
mou

6 Months Ago

you're always welcome

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Added on March 2, 2018
Last Updated on March 3, 2018
Tags: Rebirth, broken, undone