Fulcrum

Fulcrum

A Poem by Mrudula Rani
"

Katauta

"
Albeit stand lorn
Endure test of time, by the
abiding aid of divine.

© 2019 Mrudula Rani


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I thought I knew what "fulcrum" means, but your poem pushes me to consider it in different ways! Most poets are not as good as you are, delivering one solid idea in a very short poem, which reverberates in the reader's mind to produce much more than appears on the page (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


barleygirl

5 Years Ago

Watching seedlings grow . . . *smile*
Mrudula Rani

5 Years Ago

Watching seeds sprout and grow,
to the Mother Nature's magic show
you got a seat in .. read more
barleygirl

5 Years Ago

Always love your bright shining verse
meaning is pumped tho words are terse
your wisdo.. read more
This is very well written and very well put together. I enjoyed this

Posted 5 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the lovely review.
Writing short poetry is something I find really difficult, but that you always seem to achieve with a masterful touch. I particularly like the internal time/divine rhyme; it's so tempting to rhyme only at the end of the line, and your divergence from this is well crafted

Posted 5 Years Ago


Mrudula Rani

5 Years Ago

Thank you Patrick for Your brilliant perception and comments. I hope all is well with you.
thank you first of all for my education ...had to look up katauta ;) really appreciate the deep a true wisdom in this one ... you capture the best of life's best lesson ... endure, be patient and trust the Divine .. absolutely love this my friend .. thanks for sharing! as i understand it if you created a response (perhaps fro our Creator) you would then have a sedoka ... a love poem :)) great stuff says i!
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Mrudula Rani

5 Years Ago

What a divine idea! Thank you dear E for the beautiful review and suggestion of writing a fro for th.. read more
If I should ever have a poem written for me.. it would surely have to be one of these katauta love poems my sensai used to talk to me about ... N :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Now that would certainly be something to write home about.. better not tell the missus though..lol.... read more
Mrudula Rani

5 Years Ago

I am sure she understands the love of a friend .
Neville

5 Years Ago

absolutely my friend, absolutely.. :)

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Added on January 31, 2019
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Tags: Lorn, endure, time, abiding, aid, divine


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