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A Poem by Lady M

And if I was made for loving,

you were made to sew.

Fix me up to fall apart

and drown me all in gold. 


© 2012 Lady M



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TLK
Heh, wow, that's an arresting image. It took me more than one moment to consider how someone sewing could drown another person in gold.
The half-rhyme of sew / gold really helps with that image. "Fix me up to fall apart" is a wonderful oxymoron that denotes some kind of loving care that is slightly off kilter.

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