Green Supernova (Infinite)

Green Supernova (Infinite)

A Poem by Ally Monique
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You are indubitably all seasons of the universe, whether that be the hot December of Venus, or the ague August of Neptune.

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In the dead of space,
silence gathers 
like fingers on skin;
guiding me towards
distant, green withering lanterns.

Promising me safe travels,
nomadic debris as thin as plastic
carry me to where you are,
and where you are,
sounds like the chiming strings
of a waltzing October Cello.

Hesitant, I saunter,
into a Supernova of feeling;
Never had I gambled
to make love to its beauty
until you gave mouth
to this sleepless reticence.

Here, I am
short of breath,
but full of life,
In your Green Supernova.

© 2014 Ally Monique



WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.

Author's Note

Ally Monique
You make nothing feel like everything

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I was so glad to find a new one of yours, Ally... I refilled my coffee, sat down to read, and BAM! ... I was hit in the head by your 'Green Supernova!' What a beautifully cosmic event you've orchestrated--I could pick out any line and say something good about it, but "... and where you are/sounds like the chiming strings/of a waltzing October Cello" just makes me smile, sit back, and enjoy the show. This piece is gentle in tone and full of romantic metaphor. I loved spending some time in your universe. Excellent writing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ally Monique

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the thoughtful review! I wrote this for someone is is very special to me! I ha.. read more



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There is such a unique rhythm in your words, it's like a serenade of poetic bliss, this is no exception Ally, excellent read!

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is some damn good writing. It's always a joy to read your writing. I especially love the lines "silence gathers / like fingers on skin" and "sounds like the chiming strings / of a waltzing October cello". They both really work to express a sensual feeling. Really great poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


This was completely out of this world, Ally - You're such a beautiful, talented writer. I so loved this one and the title just reeled me in.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ally Monique

3 Years Ago

Thank you! it means a lot :)
This poem was out of this world. :) Ally, it was gorgeous. How you expressed this feeling of longing using space, infinite, endless space to describe your feeling was fantastic. I really enjoyed this today.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ally Monique

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :) I'm glad you came over to read
Ah the young heart adorned by the flawless hope and joy that accompanies youth.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ally Monique

3 Years Ago

your words are so calming! thank you :)
Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

You are welcome
Really cool poem! I really enjoyed reading this. Your words always come to life off of the page. You always write with such great imagery! Just really beautiful! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ally Monique

3 Years Ago

Thank you Michael, I appreciate the compliments :)
This is money all the way... Pardon the cliche compliment, but your poem gives me chills... I think it was beautiful in the way it seemed to expand its own consciousness from within itself.... Absolutely love the universal truth it exudes... K.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ally Monique

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I dont mind that it is cliché at all haha! Thanks for taking your time to read m.. read more
Kusa Da Shin Avira

3 Years Ago

The pleasure is all mine...
This poem is a perfect example of unity between human mind and galaxy. It is hard to admire one above another.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ally Monique

3 Years Ago

Thank you avinash :)
This is one of your better poems in my honest opinion. It seems something has gotten you very motivated. I love the relation of love to space as they are both vast, powerful, and even though they are so close they are so unknown. You very clearly displayed how love could make one feel as though everything is calm and slowed down with your words of silence and the cello. Beautiful piece

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ally Monique

3 Years Ago

Thanks, I've been trying really hard to improve lately, so it means a lot to hear that my later poem.. read more

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