Biscotti and Coffee Bedside

Biscotti and Coffee Bedside

 

 

 

wrapped in his love

on this Sunday afternoon

lying near the rib

of a man

groomed in a guise

of utter perfection…

a gentleman of a man

wearing a five o’clock shadow

and the inventory of a stare…

 

with biscotti and coffee  bedside.

 

Reviews

[Crowley]

Mmmmmm...this is delicious and enchanting. All of the worlds good things wrapped up into one fantastic poem. You go Kelley!!!!

[Crowley]

I mean Kelly.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You know how I feel about my coffee, right? ; )

[Crowley]

I do....but you make coffee sensual!!!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Lol, I appreciate that!

[Jibey]

This is a eye of a devotee describing a moment of complete contentment... her feeling of being created out of his side next to his heart?), of him being 'very good'...and maybe naked too - wearing only his stubble. 'The inventory of a stare' flummoxed me.. I would like to know what you had in mind... though I have half an idea what he had in mind... hence the biscotti and coffee... worth a few Brownie points, as we say.

A lovely pungent aroma of satisfaction and contentment, framed in the words that so enhance the mood and the occasion.

[Kelly Scheppers]

"The inventory of a stare" describes how he gazed fixedly upon her. Just my way of expressing how he couldn't take his eyes off her...in a most flattering way. Thank you for capturing the mood of contentment, the intense and absorbing joy of being in love.

[Jibey]

So he was making a list of her features... Yes, I was a bit slow to grasp that...Thank you!

[Kelly Scheppers]

The word "inventory" was speaking metaphorically of how long she engaged his stare. It makes sense, right?

[Neal S]

Simple and beautiful...Love it!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Much obliged, Neal...happy holidays!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Nice poem! Nicely said and the imagery was good. :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you so much...good to meet you!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're very much welcome, Kelly. Nice to meet you too!
- Cyprian.

[Gee]

My favourite of yours Kelly, loved this....

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am thrilled, Gordon...thank you so much! How's Jake?

[Gee]

Oh he's fine, getting older and grumpier, as is his master !!

[Cassie]

mind blowing...ahaa!!!! this is a picture in my mind. II hope this is not just poetry, this is amazing amazing amazing Kelly. your pen, fingers, keyboard, mind, muse never disappoint you

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are so kind, Cassie. Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

I have learn when you bring biscotti and coffee. A woman is very content. A amazing poem for love and romance dear Kelly.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

...the coffee alone would do it for me, John...thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Kelly. I love and need my coffee.

[Dara]

This sounds like a perfect way to spend a Sunday afternoon. The tantalizing aroma of the coffee and the tasty treat next to the bed only second to feeling of warmth of the arms of a loved one. You have created yet another beautiful romantic scenario with your words Kelly.

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's a wonderful feeling when you can pull the reader in...thank you, Dara!

[James]

You paint a lovely picture. Really nice.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I appreciate your review, James. Thank you so much!

[aLittlePain]

That's so rich, that feeling is unforgettable. Beautiful. R xo

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Rach...hope you are well! x