As I Metaphorically Breath You In

As I Metaphorically Breath You In

A Poem by Kelly Scheppers


 

I feel I could write forever

my pulse consisting

of syllables

and nouns,

your name being

the cardiac massage

upon my chest,

as I metaphorically

breathe you in.




© 2017 Kelly Scheppers



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as I metaphorically
breathe you in...

very nice one kelly.... words has its own magic :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Clever use of grammatical and literary terms to conjure up the special relationship a writer has - through words. Full of emotional punch.

Beautiful graphic as well!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

5 Months Ago

...it is a very special relationship, indeed...and I feel very blessed! Thank you!
Beautifully physical and sensual in both words and photography! " I metaphorically breathe you in"-a stellar visual. And as a nurse- i appreciate the somatic references even more...who am I kidding, it's the woman in me that loves this the most!:)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

5 Months Ago

I love it!! Thank you for your kind words today, and also for your dedication as a nurse - you trul.. read more
Annette Pisano Higley

5 Months Ago

((HUGS))!!
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MCS
Enjoy the ride when the muse is kind and giving.
Well done!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

5 Months Ago

...thank you!
Why do I see the possibilities of unnecessary respiratory resuscitation as a good thing?

Don't stop until they fog up the mirror.

Trace



Posted 5 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

5 Months Ago

How you doing, Trace? Thank you so much!
Trace

5 Months Ago

Doing well. Enjoying springtime in the Rockies. Snowed yesterday.
Washing the truck today.. read more
Trace

5 Months Ago

Doing well. Enjoying springtime in the Rockies. Snowed yesterday.
Washing the truck today.. read more
What better way to deal with your muse. Writing for some is a struggle to discover words and arrange syllables, while for others it second nature. Something done as sure as breathing. Well written, Kelly.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Ted. It was truly so kind of you to say!
wow! do i love this one Kelly! a retired RN its right down my alley ... personifying syllables and nouns with your pulse is brilliant... simply brilliant!! i would never have thought that cardiac massage could be so sensuous and fully romantic .. what a fine job ... surgical, deeply emotive, into my library with this one!
E.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

5 Months Ago

Thank you for the joy you bring me, Gene. I am thrilled beyond words you enjoyed it!
haha I always laugh on how you pull these gems off with such simplicity and finesse Kelly, and I wondered if you were breathing in a good brew of coffee.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

5 Months Ago

For the most part, it all pops into my head. Thank you so much for the compliment, Andrew!
andrew mitchell

5 Months Ago

so so effortless.....
The source of inspiration seen in that moment of composition, forever.
But the truth is, a time comes that you inspiration seems cloudy and the muses depart company. That's the time of inspirational invalidness.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your insight!
Rubein Geterminah

5 Months Ago

Welcome dear
The sweet smell of forever tapping away the words, phrases and ideas in the land of eternity. It's your heaven Kelly and you deserve every inch of it!

regards,
al

Posted 5 Months Ago


Kelly Scheppers

5 Months Ago

My dear friend, please consider yourself hugged! x

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Kelly Scheppers
Kelly Scheppers

San Diego, CA



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