These Thoughts

These Thoughts

A Poem by Cassiopia Summers

I have sat here, tried to think
why I keep having these thoughts of you
You've left a lasting impression,
one to withstand all my years.

These thoughts I have,
seem so sincere to me,
I keep on wondering
what on earth they could mean.

One day I know that Fate shall tell,
reveal to me their definitions,
and prove to me you understand,
you've seen how happy you make me. 

© 2010 Cassiopia Summers


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I agree with Adelia, I am fascinated to. Keep it up. ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Somethings always leave an impression forever.
Like thoughts and poems.
Great work done, I'm fascinated by the use of 'fate' in the last stanza. Such truth. Keep up the good work :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the second stanza. I kind of wish it was longer because i want to read more...you know? haha but anyway great job

Posted 13 Years Ago


humm--a very emotive poem:-)
"These thoughts I have,
seem so sincere to me,
I keep on wondering
what on earth they could mean."
i love this verse:-)
A superb Poem:-)

james:-)


Posted 13 Years Ago


It does make me wonder who makes the person happy. The first stanza reminds me of clay that has a finger print left on it, this poem itself has done that to me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


nicee..i just love every poem that i read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm making up for reviews I haven't returned. So you may get a few from me depending :). OK, this is a nice poem. I thought the first stanza has some tense issues but this poem has a very good overall effect. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


isnt it something when someone just consumes our thoughts, it is like drifting to never never land. No matter where you go or what your doing they just creep in and take over your toughts and you dream and dream then you wake up from the dream because you cheeks hurt from you smiling too much and too hard, and everyone is looking at you knowing that someone has just pushed you up to cloud 9. Yes they make you happy indeed. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i LOVE this ! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a beautiful piece searching
in the heart and mind for what it
is you need to know. ****

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Cassiopia Summers

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