Drown

Drown

A Poem by MusicHack

You think you know me

You think you know what I'm thinking

But I can assure you it isn't.

You don't want to be into my mind

Because I don't want to freak you out

So I'll plaster on a smile

And tell you I'm just fine

To make you feel warm and fuzzy

So you don't have to go through me

My only friend, help me

See through me

Because I can't talk

I can't breathe

I need my pain

I need everything you took away

Before I drown

© 2009 MusicHack


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I really like this, mainly because I think everyone has been in this situation. Even if they do not want to admit it. It conveys the emotion really well, like good poetry should.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is well written. I know how it feels to not be capable of saying what you feel and wanting someone to see right through you...pull you in their arms and tell you that everything will be alright.



Posted 14 Years Ago


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i know how yhu feel.. its so good. this is how i felt and still kind of do. lool. vey good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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MusicHack
MusicHack

Delano, MN



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