Ocean Of Sorrows

The autumn winds

peeled off

her half-healed wounds;

the winter bleeds her 

to slumber.

The world hung like

an albatross round her neck,

forcing her into sanity

when she is immersed 

in her utopian dreams.

Her sole appetite

is liberation from the agony

and to forever end

this labyrinth of suffering.

Reviews

[Kshitij Srivastava]

Suiting and amazing use of metaphors...Wise to start it off with a theme so captivating ☺

[Shekinah2015]

What scintillating, beautiful figurative language and ideas! Your poem is being voted for in the June Poetry Writing Contest. Great work!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Suffering without end.....without depth.......with no remedy even. Captivating images!

Please post more :)

[Wasekera S Chiphazi Ban..]

Enjoyed every bit of it..Nice write