When I look Into Your Eyes

(original upload found here: http://truml.com/profile/poetry-detail/100661 )

When I look into your eyes, 
the world dissapears. 
I forget my worries, problems, 
stresses and all my fears. 
Your my breath of air, 
your my light of day. 
When my words cluster up, 
you always seem to understand what I say. 
You give me reason, 
to wake up tommorow and the next. 
You so easily make my day, 
with so little as a text. 
I'm so in love with you. 
I will never hurt you. 
When I speak to you, 
you'll always know it's true. 
Well that's if it's a serious subject. 
I will never raise a hand to you, 
I'll raise a hand to someone else, 
for messing with or hurting you. 
Your my everything 
and in-between. 
When I look into your eyes, 
it's the greatest sight I have ever seen!

Author's Note

not recently written was written at about the 29/01/2012

Reviews

[~By R.N.]

This flows pretty decently. It's sweet and sincere, it almost made me cry :)

The only mistake I found was :Your my everything
It should be: You're my everything

The message is quite clear and very heartwarming. It shows the protective side of love and the little things between. So beautiful :)

[EmpressPoetess]

This has great sentiments and tenderness. Very nice!

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Nice poem! Keep it up!