FEEL IT

We feel because we’re meant to,

Though some try to numb it all.

But it’s something that we can’t do,

For we can’t build walls that tall.

 

The Heart is so uncontrollable;

Its proclivities are quite impulsive.

Yet the mind tries being unmalleable,

Searching hard for ways to be freed.

 

Love is not as logical,

As the Pythagoras's triangle.

Deducing it is as plausible,

As a foundation full of marbles.

 

Love is an adventure,

Greater than the mind could fathom.

The mind is just an aperture,

Whose view on Love seems random.

 

Soak up all the feeling,

That this life will bring your way.

Abandon all this reasoning,

That will shorten all your days.

 

                                   -M.Babu-

Author's Note

So many people I know are fighting love in this day and age. I don't know why i have the love-writing-bug…I blame the govt.! NO?..well thanks for reading anyway.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

true statement...and a profoundly amusing take on modern love.well done

[Lost in Wonderland]

Oh my gosh I loved it! So true and well written. Love really is madness, but so worth it:) nice work!
God bless
~Mickey

[Enigma]

Amazing. Such an interesting contrast between the heart and the mind. Well written. :)

[Murtuza]

A very cool poem, Michael! You sound like the regular love guru :)

[OT]

ah much wisdom in this - "Love is an adventure," - "Love is not as logical," - indeed it isn't - things of mind (or heart perhaps) aren't easily deciphered! your rhyme was pleasant here too - great write - nice!

[Aishwarya Subramanian]

Lovely.

[Emily Rae]

as I read this I was reminded that there is no "sense" in love or life, yet, that's the beauty of it truly living it. thanks for the reminder

[SINDE]

Nice work from the diction to the flow. You nailed it bruh...You were on point.
The mind is just an arperture
Whose view on love seems random...
GREAT:)

[Bella Egessa]

and are you one of the people fighting love hmmmm....??i really love this one.its priceless,straight from the heart..nyc

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Purged and restless, well done, great read