Dreamers In Love

Dreamers In Love

A Poem by Dalaina Renee
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To All Who Fall In Love With A Fictional Character Whom Isn't Real....But The Love Is...

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Dreamers In Love

 

"I love you Janet" Whisper's Paul.

Who held her close to him.

"I love you too" She whispers back, before

she kisses him.

Tangled into each others arms, they are ment

to be together.

Each one perfect for one another.

They didn't care how long it took them.

All that mattered was that they were there with

each other.

An alarm clock sounded in the background and.....

Janet opened her eyes to see she was alone in her bed.

Paul had just been a dream.....

An alarm clock sounded in the background and....

Paul woke up alone in his bed.

Janet had just been a dream....

They both get ready for work.

They both head out the door.

They go to the elevator.

Janet looks up to see Paul there.

Paul looks up to see Janet there.

The two smile at each other.

It was fate, and Paul says to Janet

"I had an amazing dream last night....."

© 2008 Dalaina Renee


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lovely. i think it was really lovely.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem, very sweet.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful imagery Ms. Renee...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww...

That was cute. :)

It would be amazing if that happened in real life.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww! This is very warm...and the imagery is just brilliant!
""I had an amazing dream last night....." This is beautiful...really such a lovely way to end a writing like this..
Great write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice. Kind of like that high school romance where they both like each other but are both way too shy to tell each other.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Welcome to my page! My name is, Dalaina Renee. I am a 32 yr old single mother of two little men. Whom I love with all of my heart. When I have free time I love to write. I love to write poems,short s.. more..

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