Only In Hollywood

Only In Hollywood

A Poem by Dalaina Renee
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Hmmm...Just A Fantasy Of What I Think It Would Be To Walk Around Hollywood!

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Only In Hollywood

 

Only in Hollywood, you feel like a star.

You meet famous people who drink at the bars.

Only in Hollywood, where you might end up with your

name up in lights.

Limos and helicopters are always in sight.

Cameras are flashing, around every corner.

History is made night after night.

Becareful not to get caught in a fight.

Where gossip is ruthless.

Who knows what is true.

Only in Hollywood, would someone notice you!

© 2008 Dalaina Renee


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Dalaina Renee
I had a fun time writing this!

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Yep, that's Hollywood for you. I can tell you, though, that's only the surface of the place. Hollywood is the only place where you can be on top one minute and sucked dry the next. I like the descriptiveness of your piece...the flow could be a little smoother, but overall, I really liked what you had to say!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Love it Mom!

Posted 15 Years Ago


As a Brit, this is quite an eye opener! You've put the whys and wherefors so concisely plus, it made me laugh... think I'll go elsewhere!

Thanks lots for sharing



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yep, that's Hollywood for you. I can tell you, though, that's only the surface of the place. Hollywood is the only place where you can be on top one minute and sucked dry the next. I like the descriptiveness of your piece...the flow could be a little smoother, but overall, I really liked what you had to say!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good ol' Hollywood, and you got it down pat.

Sal

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Keyword: Fun. This put a smile on my face... "Only in Hollywood, would someone notice you!" Stranger things have happened, eh? :~) Nice work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was short but fun. I don't think I want to be noticed in Hollyweird, it's all too superficial. I would rather be noticed where the people are real and don't expect anything in return for saying hello.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fun poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


You are too nice on Hollywood, I would say!!! I'd be SO HARSH if I were to write about Hollywood. lol
It's short, but you've got the main point of Hollywood so articulately! I like it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Welcome to my page! My name is, Dalaina Renee. I am a 32 yr old single mother of two little men. Whom I love with all of my heart. When I have free time I love to write. I love to write poems,short s.. more..

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