One More Day

What if this was your last day to live and you didn't know it?

What if this was your last day to live?

Your last day to see.

Your last day to hear.

What if this was your last day to live?

Your last day to hug.

Your last day to love.

What if you went to work and never came back home?

What if you forgot to tell your loved ones, you loved them

that day?

Where would your soul go?

Are you ready to know?

Because, you never know when it's your last day

to live....

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the seeds-of-faith contest!

Sal

[Frances O'Neill]

This is very true, we never will know when our last day will be, but it also something we never

contemplate. Nice poem!

[Guardian]

That was really beautiful. I love your versatility as a poet. In one poem you're playfully talking about snowmen and in the next you're writing a beautiful poem with a powerful and relavant message. I loved the way you wrote it and it flowed perfectly. Fabulous!

[Ethan Alexander]

Wow.

[Jay Ray]

Wow!

[Wildecat]

This is a good reminder to let everyone you care about know how much they mean to you and how much you love them. Thanks so much for writing this. A great poem.

[~*The Writer In Me*~]

So true. We don't know when we will go. I just found out that my landlord passed away. It was a shock but proves your point.

[Wondering Mind]

The ending leaves one speechless!
"Are you ready to know?-Because, you never know when it's your last day-to live...."
I believe that one will know but won't be able to "do" anything about it!