Snowmen

Snowmen

A Poem by Dalaina Renee
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Just In The Mood For Snow Fun!

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Snow is falling fast.

Piling up high.

The shovling can waite, for one night.

We roll a ball of snow together.

Then a cuple more.

Put a hat up on the head.

And rasin eyes for sure.

Add a carrot for a nose.

Some stick arms will do.

Wrap a scarf around his neck.

We go in it's getting late.

One last look at our new friend.

As we go inside.

I could've sworn, I saw him wave.....

Naw...I just had snow in my eye.

 


© 2008 Dalaina Renee



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I liked it a lot. Once again it was very cheerful and playful. I love that quality about a lot of your poetry. It's getting me in the holiday spirit! If only I could build my own snowman in Arizona. I thought there were a couple places where the flow could have been better, but it wasn't a huge deal. It was a great little poem.

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Adorable. Loved it.

Author: Nancy Lee Shrader

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a cute one, I especially like the ending about the snow in the eye its a nice touch!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwww! This is so beautiful!
Yet this is so cheerful but it reminded me of my childhood days :(
I LOVED IT!!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This made me smile, remembering the giggles and excitement of my youngsters every season.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it a lot. Once again it was very cheerful and playful. I love that quality about a lot of your poetry. It's getting me in the holiday spirit! If only I could build my own snowman in Arizona. I thought there were a couple places where the flow could have been better, but it wasn't a huge deal. It was a great little poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cool!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Welcome to my page! My name is, Dalaina Renee. I am a 32 yr old single mother of two little men. Whom I love with all of my heart. When I have free time I love to write. I love to write poems,short s.. more..

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