When A Child Smiles

When A Child Smiles

A Poem by Dalaina Renee

When you give your child a gift, they

smile so happily.....

 

We are all God's childern, and he wants us,

all to be happy.

 

God loves all his childern.

Every single soul.

 

So,smile and tell him you love, him.

So he will always know.


© 2008 Dalaina Renee



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Again, the title drew me to this one. 'When' is a good word in a title and 'child' and 'smile' are both emotive words. So I thought the poem wld be positive and it is, very. I like the way that we all become children...even if we are 94. I like this idea of adult innocence in higher eyes. It puts us in our place in a humbling sort of way, which is, I think, good and healthy. Also it is great to still think there is something of the child in us in all this.

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If more people would do this, maybe the world would be better place.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Again, the title drew me to this one. 'When' is a good word in a title and 'child' and 'smile' are both emotive words. So I thought the poem wld be positive and it is, very. I like the way that we all become children...even if we are 94. I like this idea of adult innocence in higher eyes. It puts us in our place in a humbling sort of way, which is, I think, good and healthy. Also it is great to still think there is something of the child in us in all this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful poem! Well written!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Welcome to my page! My name is, Dalaina Renee. I am a 32 yr old single mother of two little men. Whom I love with all of my heart. When I have free time I love to write. I love to write poems,short s.. more..

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