Simple Endings

Simple...

I may not have been
Your best friend

But a friend nonetheless
And now there's nothing left

Endings...

Camaraderie came apart
A couple tears to the heart

Strangers,
Funny how we finish what we start

Author's Note

Another poem I can't finish

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I agree here... I read this twice just to make sure...you started free verse...and then give this a rhyme in the ending...but incomplete...IMPO I would keep the first two lines and work on the third...and add body by putting the title in the verse...something like this example:

Simple...

I may not have been
Your best friend

But a friend nonetheless
And now there's nothing left

Endings...

Camaraderie came apart
Depart a couple tears

Fear has settle in a broken heart.

...without taking much out of the originality of your words and adding a short...simple and completed ending...

[BriBri]

I thank you greatly. I enjoyed reading your version. I shall take your advice into consideration when editing this poem again

[I Am Svetlana]

Many good friendships end as our life progresses, but perhaps they ended for a good reason. Sometimes they do, other times they don't. Either way, once it's over, it takes both friends to fight for if they want that friendship back, but you can't be the only one fighting. Put in your effort the first couple times, but if they don't respond or seem interested, then it's best to move on. No one is worth your time if they don't bother putting in any effort for good people in their lives. Great read!

[BriBri]

Thank you for reading my work and taking the time to comment. I agree with your perspective 😍😍