Falling Apart...

Falling Apart...

A Poem by Nish Nish the Fish
"

it's happening again, i can feel it.

"
Yesterday I was confused,
because my apple juice didn't taste bitter in the morning,
and somehow i slipped on dry concrete.
Today, I'm frustrated.

Yesterday I was sad,
because you spoke to me with such hate,
and you stared at me, with those glaring, corrupted eyes.
Today, I'm just frustrated.

Yesterday I was tolerant,
because I understood that it was only your first run through hell,
I was there for you,
but today, I'm frustrated.

Maybe tomorrow will be simpler?
Maybe, you'll smile at me again,
and maybe we'll even share secrets like we used to. 
Maybe we'll listen to music and laugh the day away,
Maybe tomorrow, you'll turn my confusion into light, and my sadness into love, and my tolerance into acceptance.
Maybe tomorrow will be better,
Maybe.

Either way, I'm frustrated today. 

© 2011 Nish Nish the Fish



Author's Note

Nish Nish the Fish
An emotional release no doubt, but not enough I think. I'm still frustrated.

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Posted 5 Years Ago


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That was so good. It sounds like you're trying to be there for your friend, but they don't want it. I love it(:

Posted 6 Years Ago


A lot of deep talk in this poem. We can all relate to having those days. I love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Until the last big stanza, this reads less like poetry, but that's okay, since I'm getting a feel for your emotions, which seem chalked up, trying to all get out at once. I like the repetition and I like the last line, which leaves me hanging and really feeling where you are.
I hope everything's okay.


Posted 6 Years Ago


So much emotion going on in this piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Oy, i definitely know those days for sure. And i even know when a day's not gonna go well, too hehe. This was really great tho. Hope tomorrow's a better day for ya tho. Hang in there :)

M.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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I feel this deserves an update..seeing as i'm no longer 16 ;) Well, of course i still love writing poetry, I'm actually in a poetry class right now! It's dandy.. I like the color red, alot. I C.. more..

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