Needs...

7 word poem for a contest...

Needs...

A flower

Life and power

Me...

Reviews

[Emily B]

Thoughtful and provocative. You chose seven wonderful words for your competition.

[emmajoy]

Short but sweet and says so much. Seems you're asking for more than you're receiving, but then, the reviewer below your response seems to have understood differently. Readers see different things, just like we look at paintings and notice different parts or colours or brushstrokes, etc.

Whatever, I truly appreciate your skill with words and phrases. Thank you for sharing.

[MY]

Thank you ! You are in fact the first who hit the bulls eyes understanding this :)

[Antony]

This type of writing is different and difficult all together, your statement is direct and my interpretation of this seems, that you are not talking of your needs but rather of your partners needs, very well said.
I am laughing at your Bio, very clever and humorous.
Antony

[SM Davis]

This is a very nice introspective piece. Thank you for your submission.

[emz]

This is good... the flower needs life and power to live... and so do we... i have just been introduced to this form of poetry and have had a few tries myself... its hard.

I like yours

x

[NikAvant]

How nice and yet strong. Bull's eye - in my opinion :-)