Alone

Alone

A Poem by Mystic Dreams

 

 

 

Right             I am right

         Not wrong - Alright?

I am all right

There is nothing wrong - No

                 Alright?

Alone...right?

                                  All alone

                 I am left

© 2008 Mystic Dreams


Author's Note

Mystic Dreams
Just playing with words

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wow, just playing with words...I think the perception of the word "right" , brings out the character placement of words forming around it and arbitrary flips on its counterpart. I like the direction of the flow, seem quite colorful, and teasing. Nice write wow,

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good job of playing, better than most of what I come up with! Windy

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol yeah right i am alone and im getting use to it

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is good for "just playing with words". It is surprising how much power can come from so few of words. Really good!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 16, 2008

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Mystic Dreams
Mystic Dreams

Australia



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