Leaves

Leaves

A Poem by Mysty Rayn

Melancholy leaves drip tears of autumn’s morn

Summers fling fading away

Buds of new long gone

Coloring the skis

Brights of unique

Dancing upon the wind

Glistening in the sun

The chill grasps hold

Releasing them to destinations new

Becoming a part of tomorrows earth

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

© 2008 Mysty Rayn


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I really enjoyed the picture that you painted (and I don't just say that). I always ask poets, though, to tell us readers how to read their poems. That's what the punctuation does for us. You wrote the poem, so you know exactly how it's supposed to be read. You know where all the stops and pauses are. We do not. The punctuation gives us that information. That would be my only input, otherwise, I feel your poem is letter perfect. Every word in place, and fufilling it's purpose beautifully.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautifully written
Such lovely imagery brings us a glimpse of Autumn beauty at its best...
Gorgeous!

Lynda

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so pretty, so melancholy...one misspelling you need to be aware of: Coloring the skis
You want to use this word instead: skies
Cheers,lea

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Whoa...I love this one. The metaphor is perfect for the cycle of love and just in time to cause a double whammy poem as it is fall. You rock!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. The imagery you created is eloquent and beautiful. A perfect piece for the new season.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed the picture that you painted (and I don't just say that). I always ask poets, though, to tell us readers how to read their poems. That's what the punctuation does for us. You wrote the poem, so you know exactly how it's supposed to be read. You know where all the stops and pauses are. We do not. The punctuation gives us that information. That would be my only input, otherwise, I feel your poem is letter perfect. Every word in place, and fufilling it's purpose beautifully.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful, the wonderful images of a crisp fall day where everything is tranquil and the earth seams at piece is astounding... but then again you are an amazing writer.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like this piece! It describes the ending of an old and beginning a new.. but the old is a foundation of the new... A beautifully written piece.

Autumn ink! Full of description and color just like the season. :p

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

love the imagery you have put into this piece .... very peaceful and the flow is perfect on this ... nice job on this one and thanks for all your reviews I owe you some...:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful Mysty! I think this is one of my favorites of yours... excellent imagery.

And it's so soft... somewhat of a whisper of Autumn... moving into a new season,
a new tomorrow.

Lovely.. !

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I felt as if i was walking
outside my house right now
and enjoying the day reading this

Nice work!

Orlando

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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