Frozen in Wait

My soul never complete

But I had no way to know

Till I found it's mate

And our love began to grow

 

My soul has been closed

To those who want to see

Waiting for you

To set my soul free

 

Now I sit all alone

While you keep moving on

Frozen in wait

And not sure how long

 

My heart sits heavy

Pounding in my chest

My mind runs rampid

refusing to rest

 

Missing your touch

your kiss, your smile

The sparkle in your eyes

That makes it all worth while

 

So as I sit in pain

You're smiling back at me

I tell myself if it were meant to

It most certainly will be

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

rampid- rampant? very nice..missin but wishin'.Laury

[Chris]

Have you been away and just coming back?

[Mysty Rayn]

Yes. I was away for awhile and felt the need to start writing again and getting my words back out there.

[Chris]

Well welcome back... I look forward to seeing you new efforts!

[Mysty Rayn]

Thank you!

[Jim Parson]

This is really quite touching and melancholy. The rhythm and the rhyme are great... the flow is wonderful, almost too singsong for the subject matter. Just a couple of typos for you...Till in the first stanza should be 'til. You are using it as a contraction of until. And in the 4th stanza, rampid should be rampant. Beautifully done, Mysty!