Broken

.....just feeling low

What do you see

when you look at me.

do you think i'm pretty or

am i the ugly in your eyes.

do you think i'm smart or

are my words stupid to your ears.

would you hold me

when i cry or

tell me to suck it up.

do you still want to make love to me

or does the sight of me disgust you.

would it be too much to ask

for a little of your love or

am i not worthy to be loved.

what would i need to do?

so that you don't throw me away

or am i just too broken now

for you  to ever want me again.

 

 

Author's Note

I don't know why I wrote this sometimes the mood just hit's me. Okay good bad or indifferent lay it on me.

Reviews

[fireblossom]

I sorted through some of your stuff until I found one I felt comfortable commenting on. It was worth the wait. You have captured the wounded woman brilliantly. I thought of an adult who had been abused and carried those scars into her adult relationships. The wanting to please and anger and assuming you are not is real (authentic not necessarily coming from your own experience).

Nice writing.

[Honeypot]

Its very, very good. It brought tears to my eyes. Its exactly how I'm feeling today, so it hit home. Its lovely Mia.