No Cure For Heartbreak

Bleh.

The doctor turns,

Needle in hand,

I want to run,

Yet here I stand.

 

My heart races,

As she nears my arm,

She smiles sweetly,

Saying she'll cause me no harm.

 

She pinches my skin,

I want to yelp in pain,

But now I can't feel,

When the needle hits my vein.

 

"All done." she says,

So simple and clean.

I smile and relax,

Glad I hadn't made a scene.

 

"He should be gone from your heart."

"Gone for good?"

Her smiled faded slightly,

"Well, he should."

 

I smiled and nodded,

Then left the room.

Little did I know,

I'd be back there soon.

 

When I arrive home,

I force myself to think of him,

Testing the cure,

But the result is grim.

 

I think of those light eyes,

And my heart still aches,

I start to cry,

As my heart continues to break.

 

"She said it would work."

I cry softly.

"Why can't you just leave me alone!"

I scream loudly.

 

I make a call to the doctor,

To tell her it failed,

I got her machine,

And deeply inhaled.

 

There's no cure,

To this horrid disease,

And once again,

I'm stuck in my hearts unease.

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

I thought that this was very very creative. Go to the Dr. For a broken heart ? How awesome is that ? Great job !

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This is great! It really represents how hard it is to get over a heartache! I think the image you created is very origanal. Very good writing!

[Danielle Asher]

you are such a good writer. your readers can just flow so nicely with your stories like we are in the pain with you. and I am sorry you are hurting.


peace,
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[Wolfwind Words]

Thats was cool! The thought that one could go to the docs and get a shot to remove heart ache! I've never read anything like that before! It flowed well and it's to bad that the cure didn't work. But then again, we learn more from the bad things that don't kill us, then the quick fixes. :)
I liked it! :)

[George Love]

Got to love the teen love angst! You express it all so well I almost forget you are missing someone! Very well writtne and I love the imagination!

[Nana Carmine]

Wow, I really love it.. I really love the idea that their could be a shot to forget (if only it would work). It's really sad, it made me sad. But it flowed together really well and I really like it. Great job.

~Nana Carmine