Stay Alive

One of my favorite movies. And I was bored so I decided to write about it.

I feel the air

Vibrate around me

Darkness closes in

But I can still see

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Hurry

Throw the rose!

Though you are safe

Stay on your toes

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You are only safe

Until she returns

 You must keep running

Even though it burns

 '

Hurry

Please, you must be fast!

If you do not succeed

You won't be her last

 "

The creepy things

They twitch and squirm

They come for you

You must hold firm

!

Hurry

Into the cript quickly!

Chills cause the goosebumps

That make your arms prickly

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Down the hall

And into a gruesom room

Many bleeding dead hung from above

A room for torture you assume

S

Hurry

Up the winding stair!

Get your nails and fire ready

You're almost there

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 Through the heavy door

On the bed she lie

Be careful now

It's do or die

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Hurry

Bash in the nails!

Pray her soul return

And this not fails

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 She comes to life

Her eyes black as night!

But you can't be scared

Because that was only half the fight

 N

Hurry

She's coming at you!

Grab the silver mirror

And show her the age that's true

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As she screams in horror

Get out your lighter

Let the blaze incase her

Fire is your final smiter

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 Hurry

You must get out of there!

Be quick and swift

Or the fire you will wear

M

 You made it out

Safe and alive

Her evil is gone for good

So get home and enjoy the drive

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Author's Note

Well, tell me what you think. I know it was a bit long, but I'm actually really happy with it.

Reviews

[Sarah]

I loved this! The short stanzas reflected the urgency in the story & helped set an intense tone for the poem. The rhyme also worked well! Great job with this - I definitely enjoyed reading! =)

[W. V. H.]

Dark, Gritty, It even had action, very cool.

[Brenda Sue]

Very unique! I like the symbols in between the stanzas they really brought out this piece. Wonderfully penned.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Wonderfully written, liked the adding of the little pictures in between stanzas. really brought it all out. nicely done, and easy to read.


Great Write.

[George Love]

This is good. I like it. The journey is easy to follow, well imagined and well written. Nicely done, easy to read and it sounds good aloud

[Nana Carmine]

I really like it- it takes you on a journey as you read it. It flows together beautifully- you did a great job! And so what if it's long? lol you know I read all your stuff anyways.

~Nana Carmine

[Wolfwind Words]

I like it. It's poetry that steps one along on a story ride! I can't place the movie it's based off of, so on it's own i like it alot!
Great Job! :)

The picture symbols between the stanza's were a good touch!