The Girl Can Move

And she did

Have you ever wanted something
So much
You want to reach out
And take it unthinkingly

Do you remember me?

Have you ever craved something
So badly
You want to overdose
And let it take over completely

Do you remember me?

Have you ever longed for something
So strongly
You want to steal it
But that would break it undoubtedly

Do you remember me?

Have you ever desired something
So heavily
You want to make it yours
But then it would never be

Do you remember me?

Author's Note

poem

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

This piece is wonderfully constructed for effect. For me, it shows the scene of someone coming up to another who was an attraction long ago, and now they are asking the questions out loud, and hoping that the other will hear the whisper and make the connection.

Great Ink!
Wolfie

[i.am.the.sun.]

this makes me think of things and people i wish i had grabbed hold of, and things and people i wish i didn't...

should there be question marks at the end of each of the stanzas?
very cool.

[TadKent]

This flows so well, and the voice is incredibly clear. So simple(how I like it), elegant and desperate all at once. Repetition at it's best, with your forlorn line, "Do you remember me?". You really are quite talented, and I LOVE your work. :)

[Ken Yen]

daily...though i think i should reintroduce myself, lol.
this is a nice description of longing, to be consumed with singular thoughts.

[Michael Lopez]

this is pretty good...i can relate.
i don't review much so its kinda short.