Tuberose

A poem I wrote back in 2009......

I love you

my lovely.

 

Whenever I see you

I feel happy.

 

Whenever I take your fragrance

I feel happy.

 

Truly you have a smell of celebration

and your smell organizes a blissful occasion.

 

Whenever I take your fragrance

I feel that's my wedding day.

 

It's a feeling beyond expression

I start living with imagination.

 

When I see you, touch you

feel you; I remember my Love.

 

My Love is not a she or he

But He created the beauty of eternity.

 

From Him is love, He is love

Only He is worth remembering.

 

My Poem is for you

My Love.

 

I love You

I really do.

 

You are seeing me

aren't you?

 

Look at me my Love

I love your creation.

 

Tuberose,

I love this flower, through that I see you and know your glory.

 

The feeling that I get

it's my wedding day, verily it's just a feeling.

 

For wedding is from you

You created spouses for your slaves.

 

Just the way you created this tuberose

for us, so that we may know you.

 

No matter what I feel

it is indeed for you.

 

Verily my worship, life, and Death are for You.

I am writing this poem only to please You.

 

My sole intention is nothing but to praise You.

And I know your true slaves will praise You way better than I do.

Reviews

[Ioana Georgiana]

I always found love to be quite a captivating object of one's craft. I love how sincerely this is worded, the interlacing of pure, feelings of worship with such a complex and adoring vocabulary.

[Nahian Bin Asadullah]

aww much thanks for your kind feedback, Ioana!

[GeekyGamer128]

Powerful and interesting. I liked it.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Love is an interesting subject always~

There is a spiritual quality here inside the words and a colorful image is brought to mind with the rose and its beauty in nature.

[FaeryQueen]

i wish i could rate it higher! good job!

[An owl on the moon]

Powerfully voiced poetry of such love that transcends all else on earth. That is what love should be; something to take us to a higher place.

[Nahian Bin Asadullah]

Thanks for the comment, brother C Froman :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

I found it more spiritual than romantic. And it is nothing bad. Nevertheless it talked about love that reminds one of the eternal bond that he shares with the God.
Like the idea and the style of penning it..
Relished it! :)

[Nahian Bin Asadullah]

Thank you so much for the kind review, Jyoti!
And yes it was actually written with a spiritual mindset

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Well done then.

[Nahian Bin Asadullah]

thank you :)

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Very romantic write with vivid imagery.

[Nahian Bin Asadullah]

Thank you so much, Jane!
Means a lot :)