Angel

Angel

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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Light others day if you want to brighten your own.

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ANGEL

Far above lived an angel,

Who had a beautiful smile;

And also made everyone smile.

Something went wrong it made the angel cry.

People said "Forget it angel, but please don't cry"

She smiled, because she doesn't want anyone to be sad coz of her.

She was living her life in blur.

Yet she smiled, because of people.

Thus, she came to be known as angel,

Who could light others day;

Even if she couldn't light her own.

She was an ideal angel living all alone.


© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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Ok, this it so powerful and it has so much truth. I recently a novel based on true events of some who could light others and light light herself. This piece very thought provoking and does make wonder of the loneliness of an angel. Darling

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much :) I am glad to know that you liked it
This one is nice but I do believe you can make it more better than it already is.
I just needed some few more lines I guess to better create a good imaginary thought.
Anyways, write more. :) Well done.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

I'll think and add some more lines some day. Thank you :)
Different take on one of God's creations. Valentine

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

Thank you for reading :)
well you lit my day,enjoyed the theme

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much :) that's so good to hear.
I loved the rhyme scheme.Thank you for sharing !

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. I appreciate it.
Nice Poem Saher You Write Words And Turn It In Magic

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

Thanks for that again.....☺
Sikandar Khan

7 Months Ago

Welcome Again
Sikandar Khan

7 Months Ago

Welcome Again
Emotions are filled in this one and that makes it powerful😎..

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much. Feeling really happy to know that you liked it. ☺
Farhan Shaikh

7 Months Ago

Why shouldn't I. Its sucha lovely poem😉
Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

😀 Thank you so much. I truly appreciate it.
Thank you for your request or else I would have missed it,and it was wonderfully penned....light in others life so that it brighten yours...

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

Oh thank you so much :) I am glad to know that you liked it.
A sad ending to the poetry.
"Who could light others day;
Even if she couldn't light her own.
She was an ideal angel living all alone."
The above line left the reader with sadness. To create light and can't know it. Hard place to know. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much I appreciate it. Feeling very happy to know that you liked it. ☺
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome.
Beautiful lines!!
Rhyming also adds great flow to it!
However, I think you need to use more longer and good sounding words to enhance its quality...
Overall, it's meaningful and creative :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Added on January 7, 2017
Last Updated on January 10, 2017
Tags: broken heart, pain, loneliness

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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All the noises in my head, all the words unsaid, all the emotions and struggles I faced, all my feelings found a place in my poetry in the shape of words. more..

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