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The first mistake
A band of soldiers finds diplomacy in the dreg forest comes with consequences.
A little some more

A little some more

A Poem by Najam Us Saher

A LITTLE SOME MORE

Every day, every minute,

I be lost in your memories.

Your good deeds, I adore,

From the day we grew apart,

I miss you even more.

Time runs so fast,

Like sand in my hand.

And still in my mind,

I have our memories running,

And trust me dear,

I can really do nothing.

Yesterday began to fade,

Still those past memories,

Clear in my mind,

I truly love you, those memories remind.

Sweet dreams became sweet realities,

'Coz dear, I am in love with you.

Busy in our everyday lives,

Every time I pause I think of you.

Many things to do,

Many things to talk about too,

But dear, I choose you.

To talk about,

To do anything, just for you,

'Coz dear, I love you.

Kept secrets till myself,

Never let them, let go across the door,

Your good deeds, I say every time - I adore;

Trust me dear,

With every passing hour,

I miss you and love you even more.


© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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This is wonderful. I loved this! Bravo! Keep writing :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much. It really means a lot :)
woah.... really nnoce peice i tell you. great work. loved the poetic flow...and strong emotion... nice.. keep it up.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much, I was wondering who read this old poem of mine. :)
heartspeaks

2 Months Ago

lol you're welcome.. I actually have many read requests pending so it is taking time to read...
Awesome... great job... keep it up

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much... 😊
So much to meaning. Great job.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

I thank you so much :)
this is so well written, it's very understandable. it may relate to me in a different way, to me it came off as missing someone dearly. and i love it because i relate

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

I am glad to know that it was relatable. Thank you very much for taking the time to read my work.
A very refreshing and engaging way to pass love on including the memories as well!
Keep it up :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much....really happy to know that you liked it :)
Mr.Writer

4 Months Ago

No problem :)
An enchanting love poem:)
Truly reflects a lover's feelings.
I enjoyed reading this:)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much.... :)
Neetha

4 Months Ago

My pleasure
While the title was somewhat imaginative, I didn't find anything new in the write itself. It was quite what we read in every other poem.. Not trying to discourage you or anything but I feel some of your poems are quite repetitive...

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Oh okay...I'll keep this in mind while I write a new one. Thank you so much.
Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

You're welcome.
I have our memories running,

And trust me dear,

I can really do nothing.
these lines i could really relate to....beautiful poetry and thanks for sharing this!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

I am glad you like this and can relate to it. Thank you so much ☺
Wajiha Nayeem

4 Months Ago

my pleasure pretty one!
Yearning for love had been put into words beautifully.Sweet and deep

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. :)

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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All the noises in my head, all the words unsaid, all the emotions and struggles I faced, all my feelings found a place in my poetry in the shape of words. more..

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