Deepest desire

There are somethings in ones life which they cannot change but all they can do is to accept their fate.

DEEPEST DESIRE

I feel like a child, because when I return home;

I want you to hear all my stories.

I always wanted to light up your world with fame and glory.

All this will be an imagination mother,

As for me, you are a mere memory.

I want to cry the loudest on your lap,

I want to beg forgiveness for the pain and tears I have given you.

I want to change my past,

But, I wish I could.

I want to hold your head up high,

You were the one I could call mine.

I am so far away from you.

I can just hope that you are fine.

I want to tell you everything,

 I want to show you how bitterly I cry.

Now you just can’t console me mother.

Years have gone by,

Now it’s too late,

I have just realised now,

And today I accept my fate.

Reviews

[Skib]

Very touching!! The emotion in this Poem is destructive for the reader which leads me to reflect on your pain. x Nothing is too late unless death prohibits it x

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are right... Thank you...I am glad you liked my poem :)

[Skib]

:) no problem.

[SZHZIA]

A well written poem from you filled with true emotions and feeling of a daughter for her mother. It is a nice poem on love for mother. every line of this piece has stolen my heart. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. One day you will get your destiny and fulfill your desire. I love these lines of this poem: " I am so far away from you.

I can just hope that you are fine.

I want to tell you everything,

I want to show you how bitterly I cry.

Now you just can’t console me mother.

Years have gone by,

Now it’s too late,

I have just realised now,

And today I accept my fate."

Keep it up.
Best
szhzia

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you :)

[SZHZIA]

my pleasure and you are welcome for read requests. :)