My love has come to an end

My love has come to an end

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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I have sacrificed you just for your happiness.

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MY LOVE HAS COME TO AN END

When I spoke with you for the last time,

I remember, I end up giving you a compliment.

Making you believe that, whoever would be your wife she would be very lucky.

I have never thought she would be my sister so close,

Oh! I am such a fool, you told me you love her of course.

I just believed that there could be no future for you both,

A proposal from your side you have sent,

Despite I love someone else, more than you,

I feel, my love has come to an end,

My love has come to an end.

I can see you with anyone in this world,

But truly saying not with her,

What she did towards me is just unforgivable,

You’d be mine today,

If she’d tell those things at right times.

Maybe she would save me from all my pain, but she didn’t,

So, I feel she’s been insane.

From now on, I should prepare my mind,

To just picture you both,

You have crumpled my heart,

Leaving me with no hope.

Seeds I buried in your heart,

Fruits would be stolen by her.

You were never ever mine,

So there’s nothing to lose for.

From my side, I loved you with all my heart.

Nothing much I asked you for,

Gave you enough time,

Hoping that you change your mind,

But no, also you denied your friendship.

Then, how I ever thought you were kind?

I wonder.

Later, only your friendship I asked you for.

A hundred messages I have sent,

Now I feel,

My love has come to an end,

My love has come to an end.

Dreams I had seen for us,

Will be cherished by her,

One day, you will be her new dream,

I just pray

You never leave her, like you left me that day,

I just hope,

You love her so much,

More than these words could say.

I just wish,

You always bring tears in her eyes, of joy,

Finally, I have felt what it feels like to let go,

Finally, I have learnt,

What you cannot attain,

Just let it go.

I hope and pray,

You both live peacefully happy ever,

As you were my love,

I have dreamt your happiness,

That is why, I made a brave decision to let you go,

It took me a lots of courage you know.

Today, I feel proud to say that

I loved you so much that I have sacrificed you

 Just for your happiness.

On your wedding day,

Well wishes, I will send.

I am so happy today, finally,

My love has come to an end,

My love has come to an end.


© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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Wow. That was great!!

When relationships don't flourish like we want them to, there aren't too many people who really understand that the most mature thing you can do is to just wish the other person happiness with their new relationship. Prolonged feelings of jealousy or envy in the long run just become detrimental to the overall health.

Also, I love the depiction you gave of planting 'seeds', but having the the 'fruits' stolen. Tbh, that happens often when it comes to love, and it was a great metaphor.



Posted 10 Months Ago


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Emotions, heartbreak, leaving, pain. Very easy to feel but a bit hard to translate into words that even others can feel. You did that amazingly.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

I am glad that you were able to feel that emotion and was able to understand it. Thank you so much, .. read more
Tushar Singh

1 Month Ago

Keep writing. 😊 I love reading good stuff
This sad tale has been woven into a beautiful poem! I love the way you put the words so simply, and describe the situation so intricately. Very well done :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much, I am extremely happy to know that you liked this ☺
Dreams I had seen for us,

Will be cherished by her, i like this line this is beautiful you have picturized so many emotions in this poem.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it ☺
well written. very specified and touching.
keep writing!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much. Feeling very happy to know that you liked it. ☺
you literally left me breathless.i just don't know what to say but i 'd say you are really talented writer masha ALLAH.
keep writng and stay blessed

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Since the moment I read your poem loneliness I was sure that you would love this one that is why I a.. read more
So much suffering when we arrive at an end; however, every ending is just a new beginning in disguise! Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Yes... I agree thank you so much ☺
A very sad journey in the poetry. Love teaches us many things. One is. We don't always get what we want. A hard lesson to grasp. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to honest ending. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Yes I agree.....Thank you so much sir. I appreciate it ☺
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
you explained how most relationships dont work out and i luv hw that was represented in this poem

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it ☺
Good job! Sounds like a true story!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Yes...it is...Thank you so much I appreciate it. ☺
Wow nicely done
I love the atmosphere of the story
My love has come to an end,
My love has come to an end.
This part.. wow got goosebumps just reading it

Thanks for sharing ^^

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it. ☺
Joey Nizz

8 Months Ago

You are very much welcome ^^
So happy to read the amazing work of others!
Keep it goin.. read more
Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Yes...Thank you...!!!

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Tags: unrequited love, nostalgia

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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