Life's struggle

Life's struggle

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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There is always a rising sun after every sunset.

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LIFE'S STRUGGLE
Under the shady tree I sat wondering,
What it would be like to fly like birds,
I feel so hurt when I see people with no freedom.
I see a child with her mother,
I feel so hurt thinking about those who have no one.
Places are the same with different people,
Life is the same but has different emotions.
This life is cruel and meaningless to some,
While for some they want to live it again.
Life is a blessing not a curse,
So stop living life in remorse.
It is pitiful to know time has gone in regret,
There is always a rising sun after every sunset.
Wait for your day to come,
Strive hard to achieve,
Because that's a life, it has struggle,
It is too short to stay in grief.


© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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This is amazingly great.
It's a beautiful insight. Keep it up.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

Thank you very much for reading. It means a lot :)
Absolutely wonderful from start to the great ending!!
I really love it!
A BIG well done from me!!!
:-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much :) I lack words to express my happiness. Thank you for your kind words :)
Simply marvelous writing. I has a wonderful flow and it ends very strong. I loved you you used the concept of time in this writing because time is something we forget is limited for us. I truly enjoyed this piece. Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful piece with the world. Darling.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much :) I agree with your opinion about time. And thank you so much again for reading a.. read more
Darling

1 Year Ago

It was my pleasure. I am glad you are happy from within. Darling.
True, there is always a rising sun after every sunset.. I love the message and the way this is written. Life is all about living, I guess :-)
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad that you liked this poem. :)
Places are the same with different people,

Life is the same but has different emotions.

Well written, just wow! Above lines are the most loved...super write good meanings..

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you :) I am glad you understood the meaning I wanted to convey.

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Added on February 3, 2017
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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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Some people want to live long so that they are remembered for a long time, I want to live a little and want to be remembered forever. All the noises in my head, all the words unsaid, all the emotio.. more..

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