Charming sea

Charming sea

A Poem by Najam Us Saher

CHARMING SEA 
Another day awaits me,
At a place so breathtaking,
I am near the waves of the sea,
Blessed by another morning.
Azure water shines brightly under the sun,
It provides warmth to the sea.
Playing with foam and having fun,
The waves rise with utmost efficacy.
Adoring the blue water my day has passed,
I want to behold the sight of sunset,
I wish it everlasts.
Moonlight has dominated the sky,
Into darkness the night glooms,
I am happy with the thought of the sight of a morn,
In my heart happiness blooms.

© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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I could imagine whole beautiful creation in my mind while I was reading! such an amazing piece it is! loved it :)


Posted 2 Days Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Day Ago

Thank you very much. I appreciate it.
This is definitely a beautiful piece of work!
I could actually feel the whole scene around me!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Weeks Ago

I am glad that my words made you lost in that scenery. Thank you so much. ☺
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Zoe
So refreshing! The last two lines prove to be so optimistic and make for a perfect ending. Loved it!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you very much Zoe. I appreciate it :)
Zoe

2 Weeks Ago

You're welcome
Its beautiful. You created the atmosphere.
I hope you give some helpful feedbacks in future so i can improve more:)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for reading and sure I will. 😊
Your submission is now read in the http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Nature%2C-Auroras%2C-Lights%2C-Trees%2C-Water%2C-Outdoors-Contest/54059/ please stay tuned for the winning poems. Thank you for your entry.

Posted 5 Months Ago


I love the sense of anticipation in this poem. Great job!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it ☺
The imagery is astounding for such a short poem. I have never seen any really large body of water, being landlocked as I am, but I still find I can see the rolling water. Very good job.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)
wonderful imagery. ..... You've expressed yourself nicely. I love this poem.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)
Amazing poetry for the sea. I love the sea also. My favorite place to be. I liked the description and the visions create by your words. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much :) Sea is definately a beautiful sight to behold.
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

I agree and you are welcome.
ahaa !!
beautiful lines
interesting

Posted 9 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)

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Added on February 7, 2017
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Tags: morning, waves, Sea, night, sunset

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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