Charming sea

Charming sea

A Poem by Najam Us Saher

CHARMING SEA 
Another day awaits me,
At a place so breathtaking,
I am near the waves of the sea,
Blessed by another morning.
Azure water shines brightly under the sun,
It provides warmth to the sea.
Playing with foam and having fun,
The waves rise with utmost efficacy.
Adoring the blue water my day has passed,
I want to behold the sight of sunset,
I wish it everlasts.
Moonlight has dominated the sky,
Into darkness the night glooms,
I am happy with the thought of the sight of a morn,
In my heart happiness blooms.

© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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Thank you so much for entering, as always :)

Your words made me feel bright! I could feel all that you described, even the sun, despite it being almost 4.30 and darkness is against the glass of this room!

Your words are relaxing, as well as the rhythm (much like the sea) it is very fluid.

Well done :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

I thank you so much for creating contests which I find very interesting to enter. ☺
Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

Also, thank you so much for such kind words, my heart is leaping in joy.
Nice poem. I like its calmness.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much. 😀
"moonlight has dominated the sky, into darkness the night glooms" very powerful said!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much. I am happy to know that you liked it :)
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Sky
Beautiful nature and its all you. Love to live a life, where happiness blooms.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

That's true. Thank you very much for reading, it means a lot :)
Great words...I think the sea pulls at us all- we would do well to heed it's call.
You reside in beautiful places.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

No, actually this poem is written by imagining the place I visited. I am not that lucky to live near.. read more
Just looking outside to the frost.
Your poem brings a nice warmth.
May the sea be tranquil.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much for reading, it means a lot :)
I could imagine whole beautiful creation in my mind while I was reading! such an amazing piece it is! loved it :)


Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much. I appreciate it.
This is definitely a beautiful piece of work!
I could actually feel the whole scene around me!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

I am glad that my words made you lost in that scenery. Thank you so much. ☺
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Zoe
So refreshing! The last two lines prove to be so optimistic and make for a perfect ending. Loved it!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much Zoe. I appreciate it :)
Zoe

2 Months Ago

You're welcome
Its beautiful. You created the atmosphere.
I hope you give some helpful feedbacks in future so i can improve more:)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading and sure I will. 😊

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Added on February 7, 2017
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Tags: morning, waves, Sea, night, sunset

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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