Planet we live in

Someone tell me what is acceptable in this world.

PLANET WE LIVE IN 

What will it be like to travel to another world?

Will there be life, plants and seasons?

What if you are only person living there?

How would you spend your life when there is no one to share?

What if you be a pioneer to that planet?

Will you live happily then, thinking you own the world?

It is always good to have a company don't you think?

Then why people build up walls and separate themselves from the world?

Why is that people want to be famous?

And the world they want to own,

You can leave an impression in this world,

If you do good deeds enough to help the needy.

What is the use to store in lots of money that you can't even keep a count of it?

Tell me, Who has become ever successful if he is greedy?

What is wrong with the world we are living in?

What is the use to suffer if you can't change a thing?

Reviews

[Anjali]

Nice... Liked the concept of this piece... The theme is really interesting! I loved it. Keep writing!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much Anjali. You always light my day. 😀

[Anjali]

You're always welcome!

[Richard McLin]

Good piece, very well done.
-Richard

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. It really means a lot.

[Darren K. Jackson]

Selfishness is what's wrong with this world. Me, me, and more me. Deep thought and insight on this one. Have a blessed day! Keep writing what you are feeling to help inspire others who are afraid to...

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes the world is being greedy and selfish day by day. People are concerned more about money and less about humanity. Thank you so much Sir.

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A very philosophical write!

We live in a modern world where possessions have become more desirable than respect, love and care of our fellow kind. There is so much self absorbed greed that many of us are too busy looking after our own interests to take a moment to look after someone elses. To make an impact in someone's life. To make an impact on the world that is greater than all the money in it combined. Until we take a step back from our own lives and look and really see, then not much will change.

An interesting poem to ponder. Many wise questions have been raised that we all need answers to. Nicely executed work!

[Najam Us Saher]

I really agree with your views. I am glad I was able to make my readers think on this subject. Thank you so much :)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Wait.. Give me 1 whole stormy year to answer those. :) Anyways, this is a good one. Kind of stir the minds of those who reads. I just felt like this lacks a little emotion and a sense of lyrical image.

On the other hand, it is good. :) Well done.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes...I agree with you. Thank you so much :)

[AshlynnStyx]

Good questions. They scrape just the surface.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[AshlynnStyx]

You're welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

You asked good questions in the poetry.
"If you do good deeds enough to help the needy.
What is the use to store in lots of money that you can't even keep a count of it?"
The above lines is a very good question. In death. What we hold on earth is meaningless. Thank you Najam for sharing the powerful poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes I agree with you sir. Thank you so much or reading. I am feeling very happy to know that you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Giulia King]

As I was reading this I started thinking about parallel universe. Maybe that exists? People put up walls because maybe they've been hurt one too many times. Great poem :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Maybe different worlds exist who knows😉 thank you for reading I am glad to know that you liked it.

[Valentine]

Very much said in just a few words. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you.