My dearest father

I love my father more than anyone else.

MY DEAREST FATHER 

I have written several things for my mother,

I equally admire and love you more than her father.

I am not afraid to unveil my past,

Oh! Father your place in my heart is vast.

I had no mother since years,

She left me and I was in tears.

You were the one who took care of me father,

You turned all my tears to laughter.

Every night I woke you up,

But you never said anything to me.

Every day I created fuss,

But you bared all my tantrums with ease.

No one can take that place you have in my heart.

I have loved you since the very start.

I cannot imagine being away from you,

I have not loved anyone else more than you.

I lack words to say what all you have ever done for me,

You were my mother too,

You took care of me like she would do.

But she was not with me,

You have filled her love by loving me from her side too.

I always want to see you happy,

No one can ever do what you have done for me,

You are the best in the world,

You are best in whole history.

I am sorry for every pain I have caused you,

I am in tears father,

I cannot imagine losing you.

Reviews

[Dara]

Just beautiful! This came straight from your heart. A wonderful tribute to a loving father.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind visit. I am feeling really happy to know that you liked it.

[boygene borice]

What a beautiful poem for a father. Its always honor and pleasure to treasure our fathers all the time

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am feeling truly happy to know that you liked it.

[heartspeaks]

This poem went straight through my heart. It is less a poem and more of emotion. I felt connected . Thank you very much for sharing this . It was really beautiful. I hope someday you gift this to your father and he shall be proud of you. It was a complete blend of emotions and poetry . What matters to a writer is not how beautifully it is written , rather how closely a reader reads and associates. being a reader , my review is .. i loved it.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for a beautiful review. I agree with you.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful poem. Not many can say what you have. Well expressed, feeling very heartfelt and moving.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind visit. I appreciate it and your words meant a lot

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome

[Manu]

Very very heart touching poem, Saher. You have put your heart into this piece. A great ode to your Dad. Very beautiful poem :-)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am feeling really happy to know that you liked it.

[Tanya Ramsail]

Wow its seriously amazing... Your work is great

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad that you liked it :)

[abhishek srivastava]

Tooo good..... Nobody is in the world who takes place of mother except only one that is FATHER

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes. Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it.

[Zoya]

No one can take mother's place but in this case, I guess, your father has done it. This was heart-breaking and emotional. I admire your talent of putting your thoughts clearly into words. I loved it :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much. Truly feeling very happy to know that.

[Zoya]

Most welcome :)

[Giulia King]

A very sad yet amazing write.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it.

[Poeticme]

This is a very powerful write, I was also very close with my father, he has since passed , but he is with me everyday, ...Perfectly penned

Poeticme

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much Sir. I am feeling very happy to know that you liked it.