Morning star

Rising sun brings a hope

MORNING STAR

She hides her pain really well,

When her happiness turns to sadness you can never tell.

She has seen worse days,

Her life changed, her mind in a state of haze.

She lost all her hope,

Her extreme emotions she couldn't cope,

She was left alone all by herself,

No one knows her, than myself.

She suffered in silence,

There was no one for her guidance,

She was blamed by all,

She blamed herself for her fall.

She was dead inside,

She felt alone to have no one by her side.

She has spent miserable days,

Till today she seeks a perfect place.

Every good thing in her was forgotten,

Even she forgot them,

She started to hate herself,

In her melancholy she was engulfed.

Her smile is lost,

Her heart is still covered in frost,

Her life is messed and shabby,

She just wants to be happy.

She still hopes for the better days,

She hopes she will fit in a perfect place.

She smiles even when her heart is in scars,

Each day she rises up in hope;

For her name means morning star. 

Reviews

[Rassoul]

Perfect, perfect poem Najam!

It's so touching and I felt a lot of words, good work!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading..... I am glad you liked it :)

[Angel]

Wow. This is so touching. Nicely done. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Angel]

anytime :)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

What a beautiful and haunting poem this is...you eloquently describe the life and suffering of a woman struggling through life with grace and hope "She smiles even when her heart is in scars"..."Her name means morning star" . I applaud you!

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh thank you so much for reading my work...I am glad that you like what I write....You made me really happy... ☺

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

Beautifully written! I love the way you incorporated the meaning of your name at the end of the poem and brought in so much courage transitioning from despondency to shining hope. Very well done! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh thank you so much. I am feeling truly happy to know that you liked it. ☺

[Zoya]

Courageous poem, indeed! or rather, courageous you! The last two lines really touched my heart. I loved it :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much ☺ You made me happy.

[Zoya]

good to hear that :) you're welcome

[Abhishek Asthana]

the term "morning star" has been very well defined in this poem... it reveals out sad truths behind every shining elements that we really never notice... so extremely nice creation... stay blessed !!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I wish and pray that you stay blessed too. The term morning star is actually the literal meaning of my name ☺ I am glad to know that you liked it.

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

She smiles even when her heart is in scars,
Each day she rises up in hope;
For her name means morning star.

Wow.Just wow....These lines perfectly described the little hope evoked after a painful period, like a calm after the storm.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes....Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it ☺

[Alice Maria]

This is an amazing poem. There is a lot of emotion put into it.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it ☺

[Alice Maria]

You welcome😄

[heartspeaks]

This poem makes me want to give you a tight hug. This touched my heart cause i've gone through mutual time. This is purely AN EMOTION , nothing less. I can say for sure that you felt a weight lifted off your heart after you wrote this. May Allah bless you and may all the things in your life turn from left to right😉 . being a hyderabadi i would comment a hyderabadi tareef here.... your poem was AL KIRAAK AL MAUT😂 u get it 😅. Stay happy .

[Najam Us Saher]

Hahahahaa feels great to hear known phrases. 😂 Thank you so much for such kind words. They really meant a lot. May Allah bless you too and shower his blessings. Thank you so much. ☺

[heartspeaks]

Aameen and my pleasure😊

[Najam Us Saher]

You made me laugh a lot. Thank you for that ☺

[heartspeaks]

and you made me smile saying that...so thank YOU.😊

[MarviQueen]

Beautiful imagery in this poem! I particularly like the last few lines; they definitely stir up emotions!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Feeling very happy to know that you liked it ☺