Life goes on

Closer look towards nature.

LIFE GOES ON

I walked down the path looking at the trees,

Mesmerized by the scene,

I let myself go along with ease, 

Wind was strong to disturb the leaves,

And they fell with an autumn breeze.

Then I realized even the leaves are temporary,

They grow again and there is spring.

I moved on and looked at the waves,

It made me lost in daze,

The sand was washed away beneath my feet,

The waves come and they are gone,

They rise up and they fall,

Nature conveys broader meaning,

Only if we understand,

It provides calmness,

It reminds life goes on.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. A wonderful poem shared and thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you so much for reading my wonderful friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[ElizaB]

Thank you for this :)

I really really enjoyed reading it.

Although your language is simplistic, I feel that is all it needs! You do not need to use overly complicated words to express anything in life and I feel (especially with poetry, or perhaps life in general), a few words or the smallest of actions ca n mean everything.

Your poem flowed nicely from beginning to end, you had lovely imagery of earth and life all the way through and it was altogether calming to read.

As always, thank you for entering.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am extremely happy that you find my poems to be simplistic in style, I also feel poetry should be such. Thank you very much. 😀

[Harley Quinn]

Wow, This is amazing. I'm very impressed.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Zoya]

Very much true. In our busy lives we tend to overlook the beauty of nature around us. Everything here, teaches us something or the other...we need to observe it, understand for ourselves. Then everything in life has meaning. Great job!

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are right. Thank you so much. ☺

[Zoya]

My pleasure :)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Of course. And your talent goes on as you write this one. You are indeed good in making these kind of poems. Keep it up. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You just made me very happy. Thank you so much for such kind words. ☺

[wordman]

we are a cycle,we never end,and life reminds us every day

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes that's true. Thank you so much ☺

[Darling]

This is a wonderful piece and a great reminder that life does go on and not to be stuck in the past. Darling.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes that's correct. Glad to know that you liked it. ☺ Thank you so much.

[Anjali]

I'm​ really happy to know that you have moved on in life. I know I'm young, and I can't give you relationship advices but still it's good to know that you are moving on. By the way, the poem is beautiful, as always!😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Hey you caught the words wrong. I meant to say that I moved on from the place where I was observing the tree. 😀 By the way thank you so much.

[Anjali]

Oops! I'm sorry. I'm not in my right mind,now a days. I always feel like nothing.

[Najam Us Saher]

You will pass through it. I am sure. ☺

[Anjali]

Thank you so much!

[Mr.Writer]

Ooh! I felt warmth pass by this poem :)
Very well done Najam :)
I love this!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Feeling truly happy to know that you liked it. ☺

[z.chéri]

i love this. Short, sweet, simple and inspiring!!! You have just given me so many ideas for future poetry! Nature is Definitely one of my favourite things to write poetry about.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes nature is always inspiring. Thank you so much. ☺