Humanity is above all the riches

Humanity is above all the riches

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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The importance of being kind and concerned.

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HUMANITY IS ABOVE ALL THE RICHES

Humanity is greater than all the divisions,
We all belong to same earth,
There should be no discrimination or separation.
Each of us have our own worth.
We all are humans,
Separated by divisions,
There is humanity in us,
We all have equal strength nor more or less,
Faith, beliefs and cultures,
Are different and should be respected,
Care and concern in our hearts should be nurtured,
This is life...Nothing can be expected.
Borders and states are just divisions,
Peace lies within each one of us,
There is life above all the riches,
There is peace and happiness,
Only when you are kind and concerned,
And realise humanity is above all the riches.


© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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This breath taking. Great work.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much. ☺
This is an important & clearly-stated message for our current times. I so agree with every point you are making here. There's only one thing I noticed . . . the word "humanity" is actually vague -- what do you mean by this? It would be good to SHOW us with some detailed firsthand examples of what "humanity" looks like. "There is humanity in us" -- what does that really mean? I think it's a crutch to use a long-a*s abstract term to say what you want to say . . . SHOW US, instead. I want to see word pictures of people being kind & accepting to each other -- give me specific examples of how people act when they are showing their "humanity" -- show me people saying & doing the right thing. I do not think you can change this poem, but this is something to keep in mind for future writing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

I understand your point. By writing 'There is humanity in us'I meant to remind people that there is .. read more
classy!
commendable writing

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much...!! 😀
Wise words for the fragility of life in the modern age.

The trouble is that the few who dwell beneath humanity create so much friction for all of those who dwell within it. Life never really reaches a state of true equilibrium.

A nice write with a hopeful moral message contained within.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

I am really happy that you understod the message I wanted to convey. Thank you so much :)
wouldn`t it be a great world if we were all considerate to each other

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Yes absolutely it would be a better place to live....
Difference is wrong according to most if not all societies. They want similarity, conformity, not individuality and abstract concepts of personality of all beautiful minds. This just makes me think that the world tends to promote things they tend to discriminate against. A human is a human, no matter what. That's my opinion though. Good job.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

I agree with your views...I really like your thoughts about individuality. Thank you for sharing the.. read more
You are right Najam.
"There is peace and happiness,
Only when you are kind and concerned,
And realise humanity is above all the riches."
The above lines. I wish could happen. Today world controlled by the rich and the few. Only way to change. Common people stand as one. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Yes I wish the same and hope that people realise the importance of humanity in future and make this.. read more
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and I love your work.
Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

I am really grateful to hear that :)
yes it's really true that humanity is above all the riches....theme and poem is just amazing...Well written


Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much....I am really happy to know that you liked it :)
Sanskrity Mishra

4 Months Ago

Yes i really liked it...Keep writing
This is very good... well done keep up the great work

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much...I am glad you liked it :)
Rlly true wrds tht u written in this poem. Well done keep writing such type of poem which rise humanity and inspire people to respect humanity...

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

I appreciate your view on humanity.....Thank you so much.... ☺
Mamta Sonowal

4 Months Ago

Ur welc'me...

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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