Your Existence

30 June

YOUR EXISTENCE 

You are miles far from me, we have to be this way.

Situation was such we had to be away,

You are my mother, that's all I can say,

I miss you a lot more today as it is your birthday.

I know not how you are,

I am yours yet you are far,

You left, leaving me with a scar,

And cause me to struggle in a never ending war.

All I pray that every happiness finds you,

And give you a chance to be renewed,

I can never understand the pain you have gone through,

Being far away, all I can do is wish you.

Reviews

[Joey Nizz]

This is a very powerful/beautiful read, your mother is such a lucky woman to have you in her life as a daughter. A very happy birthday to your mom :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh thank you so much. You made me really happy :)

[Joey Nizz]

Your very much welcome ^^

[Zephyr]

You are a loving daughter Najam:)
It reflected in your poem!
Thanks for sharing dear;)

[Najam Us Saher]

I really thank you a lot for reading this... :)

[Zoya]

She must be very happy and proud to have you as her daughter...very well expressed...kudos to your courage, and a very happy birthday to your mother :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Maybe...Thank you so much. :)

[Zoya]

It's true. She would be proud. You're welcome :)

[Rashi Jain]

So beautiful 💕
A very happy birthday to her😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) I mean it.

[shriya mehta]

one of the best ways to tune into how you feel....nice it is;
do wish your mom a very happy birthday.:P

[Najam Us Saher]

Thanks a lot... :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very well expressed..
I always said that poem or stories based on one's family is more special because they're about the family..
Loved it..
A very happy birthday to your mum..☺

[Najam Us Saher]

You are correct....Thank you so much ☺

[Abraham George]

you are the best poet that express the feeling and emotions so good.

[Najam Us Saher]

I feel honoured to hear that. Thank you so much you make me very happy. :)

[Sofia]

Happiest birthday to your mum... it's such a lovely and beautiful gift to your mom...I love this..keep writing :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Surya]

I have to say this....Hell these emotion coz after reading your's a drop fallen from my eye...hahaha...
It's so beautiful ...sorry for my late visit, but it's worthy...
Thank you for this write..And,
A very beautiful Birthday wish for your Mom with such a wonderful gift from such a Kind daughter....I loved it...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really happy to hear that. Thank you so much ☺

[Priyanshi]

Wishing your mom a lovely happy birthday, dear....
Wonderful poem, it is. and stay happy.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thanks a lot :)

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure.