Unhappily ever after

Unhappily ever after

A Poem by Najam Us Saher

UNHAPPILY EVER AFTER

Why is that every boy who loves truly
Finds a girl who doesn't value his love?
Why is that every girl who loves faithfully
Finds a boy who shows no respect for her love?
Why is that when both love each other truly
The world doesn't allow them to be;
Suppressed by the domination of helplessness
They stay apart and live unhappily.

23-9-17



© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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I know little in regards to love, but of one thing I am sure: as with all things in life, it is rarely fair.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

True, thank you so much for a wonderful line.
Sometimes love isn't fair. We learn to accept less. I liked the honest thoughts leading to realistic ending. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

I thank you so much for reading.
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
This is really beautiful Najam
But I guess there are reasons that are even beyond our understanding, I guess if 2 soul are meant to be then they are meant to be, but also maybe this is a test of time and space, some souls need the time to truly understand each others love and some just need the space to show them how much they need each other.
Anyways one way or an other, I have always said this, everyone in life deserves someones or that there is always someone for everyone, no matter how long it takes.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

You are absolutely right. Thank you so much for reading my works with utmost passion. It really mean.. read more
Joey Nizz

8 Months Ago

your always welcome, true talent has to be recognized ^^
This is beautiful, and thanks for entering it in the contest. But, it doesn't exactly fit the criteria. It's supposed to be a short story about a particular fairy tale character's life after happily ever after. Great poem though!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

10 Months Ago

Okay, I get it now. My bad I misunderstood the title. But I am happy that you liked this poem, thank.. read more
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Not every, perhaps many but know where you are coming from. Adolescent love is mostly no more than crushes or on the boys part a hormonially charged want to see a naked woman and have sex..

Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

Absolutely right. Some love stories are incompletely completed forever.
Thank you so much fo.. read more
Wow... Wonderful, it's the bittersweet truth! You really made me read it like 5 times.beautiful! I loved it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much for such kind words.
Anjali

1 Year Ago

You are very welcome!
👍 Wow, it's beautifully written...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much for appreciation.
I haven't really thought about it that way. There are sometimes though like a divine decree that we find the perfect person for us. I guess we're just looking for that

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

You are right, thank you so much for reading.
True lovers can't be separated from each other, no matter who comes their way out there.
Maybe in distance but their hearts are always stay connected.
Their networks never ever get weaker.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

True, thank you very much for taking the time to read my work. I appreciate it. ☺
Thats soo true Najam
Sometimes, things just go out of place :)

Its destiny though!
Lovely written :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

I am glad that you agree. Thank you very much :)

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