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Unhappily ever after

Unhappily ever after

A Poem by Najam Us Saher

UNHAPPILY EVER AFTER

Why is that every boy who loves truly
Finds a girl who doesn't value his love?
Why is that every girl who loves faithfully
Finds a boy who shows no respect for her love?
Why is that when both love each other truly
The world doesn't allow them to be;
Suppressed by the domination of helplessness
They stay apart and live unhappily.

23-9-17



© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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This is beautiful, and thanks for entering it in the contest. But, it doesn't exactly fit the criteria. It's supposed to be a short story about a particular fairy tale character's life after happily ever after. Great poem though!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

Okay, I get it now. My bad I misunderstood the title. But I am happy that you liked this poem, thank.. read more
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Gee
Not every, perhaps many but know where you are coming from. Adolescent love is mostly no more than crushes or on the boys part a hormonially charged want to see a naked woman and have sex..

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Absolutely right. Some love stories are incompletely completed forever.
Thank you so much fo.. read more
Wow... Wonderful, it's the bittersweet truth! You really made me read it like 5 times.beautiful! I loved it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much for such kind words.
Anjali

3 Months Ago

You are very welcome!
👍 Wow, it's beautifully written...

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much for appreciation.
I haven't really thought about it that way. There are sometimes though like a divine decree that we find the perfect person for us. I guess we're just looking for that

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

You are right, thank you so much for reading.
True lovers can't be separated from each other, no matter who comes their way out there.
Maybe in distance but their hearts are always stay connected.
Their networks never ever get weaker.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

True, thank you very much for taking the time to read my work. I appreciate it. ☺
Thats soo true Najam
Sometimes, things just go out of place :)

Its destiny though!
Lovely written :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

I am glad that you agree. Thank you very much :)
They stay apart and live unhappily.....ever after ;) hehe... i find this very interesting Najam..
We are always bend of happily ever after we forget the truth of never getting them... its just a goal which seems so surreal..

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

You are right, thank you so much for reading. I am happy that you liked it. ☺
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Zoe
Well concluded. That really does happen. Nicely written, Najam!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
Zoe

3 Months Ago

You're welcome
i am feeling so sorry for you.

this hurts. i am helpless here . But be strong and let the life flow. You will surly met him one day and then your life will spring

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

Life will spring, very pleasing phrase. No need to be sorry friend, thank you so much for taking the.. read more

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Hyderabad, India



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