A star among many

A star among many

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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A star wishes to see a star

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A STAR AMONG MANY
I was a star for my parents,
They named me one.
I brought light to their lives
I felt warm with them; they are my sun.
I lost the major ray of sunshine,
She was my mum.
She drifted away from me,
Every day was a light year
And my life a black hole.
My starlight has lost the source to reflect, 
I, a star wishes to see a star,
Waiting for a falling star to wish upon,
My wish is fulfilled when the comet falls.
For I hope my mother will fall for me as a shooting star.
I wish that my life is filled with galaxy of happiness,
In which a tiny star I remain.




© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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A beautiful concept, and I like the photo. So sad though. Leaves me feeling somber.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
The feels. great write! :D


Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much 😊
Sometimes a tiny star can shine the brightest in the darkest places.You wish for a galaxy of happiness and it starts with tiny stars like you.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

You make me smile. Thank you very much for such heartfelt words. 😊
Hasventhran Baskaran

11 Months Ago

You are welcome
Such a beautiful star you are. Good one:)

Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

Thank you very much ☺
The creativity.... You can feel it in the poem.... It's radiating so much! The way you wrote some lines are so beautiful. It's amazing!!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

You made me really happy. Thank you so much :)
Anjali

11 Months Ago

Haha.. you are very welcome
Good one. Liked this poem !

Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
I love how you relate your family to stars and outer space and how painfully beautiful this poem is. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

12 Months Ago

Thank you very much for reading. Every appreciation means a lot.
Thats sooo true and beautiful Piece........

Posted 12 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

12 Months Ago

Thank you very much. You made my day 😀
Wowiee That is a lovely read..I loved it so much

Posted 12 Months Ago


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Najam Us Saher

12 Months Ago

Overwhelmed to know that.
You have my greatest gratitude. 😀
Beautiful words shared. I liked your thoughts and you remember your mother. A heart felt poem shared my friend. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

12 Months Ago

I thank you so much for taking the time to read this. I am really happy to know that you liked it. T.. read more
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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