A star among many

A star among many

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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A star wishes to see a star

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A STAR AMONG MANY
I was a star for my parents,
They named me one.
I brought light to their lives
I felt warm with them; they are my sun.
I lost the major ray of sunshine,
She was my mum.
She drifted away from me,
Every day was a light year
And my life a black hole.
My starlight has lost the source to reflect, 
I, a star wishes to see a star,
Waiting for a falling star to wish upon,
My wish is fulfilled when the comet falls.
For I hope my mother will fall for me as a shooting star.
I wish that my life is filled with galaxy of happiness,
In which a tiny star I remain.

© 2017 Najam Us Saher


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i`m sure she will shine on you once again,lovely poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

I hope for the same. Thank you so much for appreciation :)
A lovely poem
Every day was a light year
And my life a black hole....loved these lines very much, Najam...it is so beautifully penned.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for such kind words. It means a lot :)
Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

My pleasure, dear
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A nice write of wishes and longing....

I enjoyed your use of expression of yourself as a part of the galaxy and the mention of other celestial bodies in relation to those you treasure.

For in the vein of a famous tune, when you wish upon a star your wishes may very well come true.

Keep wishing. Good work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

I am overwhelmed to know that you liked it. Thank you very much ☺
great work and emotion from your part. love it

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

I am extremely happy to hear that, thank you very much.
Great imagery and nice use of the meaning of your name. Everything related to the universe fascinates me. Magically written!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for such kind words. It really means a lot.
Zoya

6 Years Ago

No problem
Simple Poem And Sweet Wish And Emotional For You As You Described Yourslef Star For Your Parents And I Hope One Day Your Wish Will Be Complete....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
In Shaa Allah it will get fulfilled.

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Added on October 20, 2017
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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

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