Flawless

Flawless

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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Sometimes imperfections are perfectly designed

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FLAWLESS
Even broken things are beautiful to look at,
There is beauty in a face that doesn't smile.
Not everything is meant to be perfect,
Sometimes imperfections are perfectly designed. 

Look beyond, look above,
There lives a soul without life,
Tell her, make her believe that she is alive.
Despite all the negativity
And all the fruitless efforts,
She smiles; yet believes that she is no good.
After all that has happened,
Her hope died, but her desire to live remains.
Make her believe, even broken souls are beautiful too.
Her life all messed up, her destiny all tied,
She feels that she has no beauty, 
Because life took away her smile.
Make her believe that a face which doesn't smile is happy too.
She claims she is imperfect, 
She has never done anything right in her life,
Talk to her, make her believe, 
That she is flawless even in her imperfect life. 

© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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Huh...the first stanza!!! It makes a visible way to take flaws as your perfection.
This needs to be in my library😀

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much. I was sure you would like it, that's why I shared it with you. 😀
your poem fades the sadness away....this is really inspiring..every imperfection is made perfectly... your Words touched me.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Your words completed my day. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my works, you made me so .. read more
Priyanshi

5 Months Ago

Now, your words will make my day....hahahha
Have a beautiful day, dear.
She smiles; yet believes that she is no good.
After all that has happened,
Her hope died, but her desire to live remains. (maybe you can edit this line)

mmm i so understand these words.... like small whisper of my own soul.... felt like that... thanks for sharing this wonderful creating..



Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

I am glad that you found it to be relatable. Thank you so much.
"She claims she is imperfect,
She has never done anything right in her life..."

You're words are very powerful and I can reflect on those words hit hard. This piece is wonderful. :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

You made my day, thank you very much for taking the time to read my work :)
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"Talk to her, make her believe,
That she is flawless even in her imperfect life." ...so powerful.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading. I am glad that you found it to be powerful :)
From the start I knew I'm gonna be reading something which will touch my heart...and your work never fails..


Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

I feel extremely honoured and happy to hear that. 😀
It felt like you were talking about me. I am like that way too.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Oh! Okay. I am happy that I wrote something you could relate with, thank you so much.
I can understand what is happening to her, whom wants to have the destiny all tied against its will? That alone can make one hopeless and therefore do think that one is not good enough. She must look for the strength inside her, and understand that she is God´s creation together with all the other beautiful wondrous he has created.
Thinking about the messed up life and flaws...etc...it is concentrating on the negative, and that has a different vibration.

Definitely a very good poem. I am very glad I read it! :-)


Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Wow. I am speechless to read your words. You are right one really feels this way after destiny leave.. read more
Silmara McGarry

5 Months Ago

You are most welcome!!! :-)))
Fabulous...No words to express more than this. Love it:)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

I am overwhelmed to know that, thank you very much 😀
A sad face nicely pictured.. Loved it

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much, much appreciated.

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